The Adventure of the Treasure Hunt by Musa Demets, age 8
One day, Musa and his dog were sitting on a rock, and Musa’s dog said, ‘’What are you looking at?’’ Musa said, ‘’I am looking at a map.’’ Then, Musa’s dog said, ‘’Maybe we can find the treasure in the map.’’ ‘’Yeah! That would be awesome!” said Musa. “Come on! Let’s go!”
The first obstacle of the map was to cross the river with the crocodiles. Musa found some rocks in the river and then he took action. Guess what he did? He hopped from rock to rock, and so did his dog.
Then it showed on the map that there was a harder obstacle coming up. They looked up and guess what they saw? They saw a huge mountain, and it said on the map that they had to climb it. Half of the day was gone when they finished climbing it.
Then the map said they had to go through the mountain’s jungle, filled with roaring tigers and lions. To get through it, they made cardboard cut-outs of themselves (do not tell the lions and tigers OK?). They hung the cardboard cut-outs on a tree, and then they (the real ones) went on around the bushes to pass them secretly. The lions and tigers were distracted by the cardboard Musa and his dog.
Then they found a place with so many bushes. One of them had the treasure, but which one? Then Musa heard his dog say he found something. Guess what it was? The treasure!! Musa opened the treasure. Guess what was in it? It was another map to find the real treasure!!
So Musa said to his dog, “What is this! We came here for this!" Musa’s dog said, ‘’So let’s find the next treasure on the map, instead of talking about how we came all the way here. Ok, so should we start?’’ Musa said, “You are right and so let’s get started! So now it says on this second map that we have to go across the mountain to the other side. Let's start then.’’
They suddenly stopped. There in front of them was the most hugest snake they ever saw in their life! It was bigger than them! Musa took his flute out, and he used it like snake charmers do. The snake was happy and it got distracted by it. They ran away and got to the opposite side just in time.
The next thing was to jump from the other side of the mountain. Luckily, they had some help from their gear boxes -- they had parachutes! The last thing on the map was a hard one. At the bottom of the mountain was a huge river with rapid water, and it said they had to go to the bottom of the floor of the rapid river. So they put on their super diving suits and went in.
Then a horrible shark looked at them with a terrifying face. They saw baby sharks at the bottom of the river. Then they knew what the shark wanted - she wanted them to get away from her babies.
Then Musa’s dog said ‘’I see something under the sharks place where she keeps her babies! It’s the treasure!! Yay, lets pull it out!” When they opened it, they saw golden coins that showed an 'M' logo on it! Under it was another map again!
Musa and his dog went back to their lab with their treasure, and they found out that there was a certain type of bad group that was trying to steal the treasure. So now Musa and his dog knew that they were not the only ones trying to find the treasure. If the bad group found the treasure first, they would do something very bad.
At the same time, Musa and his dog were trying to find out who this mysterious person was who had made the whole treasure hunt. A bit before, Musa and his dog used their super scanners to find any information on the treasure and they found a photograph. Because the photo was so dirty, all they could see was a picture of a bit of a temple, so they figured that the mysterious person must have lived there.
Musa and his dog needed to get back to finding the treasure, so they looked at the map and it said to go through the Wicked Path. "It's called the Wicked Path because there are blood sucking bats, dark trees, it's all dark and it has wicked ghosts in it," said Musa. So now how will Musa and his dog get past?
I don't know how they did it, but they did, and this is how they did it. They took out their wings from their backpack and those wings have jets. So they attached them their bodies and flew over the wicked path easily and fast!
When they passed the wicked path, they met some strangers, but the strangers were the same bad group they looked up before! So Musa and his dog ran! But the bad people ran after them, so Musa and his dog took out their fighting suits and their swords and they charged! But the bad people had swords too!
They charged as well but then Musa and his dog heard footsteps. They were from two knight guards who heard the noise and came to see what was going on. Then Musa and his dog saw the logo on the knights and it was of the temple that they saw on the treasure! So the knights took the bad people to jail and took Musa and his dog to the temple.
Musa and his dog saw the mysterious person (his name was Super Master). He gave them the treasure. It was two golden swords and they had energy crystals with super energy. Whoever has the crystal will be the most awesome person in the universe. He also gave them $1,000. Musa and his dog were very happy they had completed their quest, and were now the most super boy and dog in the universe!